illegal poem - Page 2

Sid · 09-19-2006, 08:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Bruv

If I may take exception to the premise of the dissertation with a little critique ?
Entitled "The Illegal Immigrants poem" the first stanza has us believe someone who by his own admission is "Broke" catches a bus.......with what did he purchase his ticket?
Then he arrives at the Employment Exchange without any ID such as National Insurance number or P45 ,P16, driving licence, and he is then advised that he will no longer have to make any more attendances, but his money will be sent directly to his non existent home address ( another check ie.... residency ......required by such agencies) Unless of course he had previously arranged for lodging before he arrived penniless.....but this was not mentioned in the narrative.
There is also talk of "Welfare Checks" but why didn't they check his documents before making payment cheques ? Thanks for drawing this flaw in the welfare system to the authorities attention.
It would appear also that the level of benifits are far too generous if these people can afford to buy up whole nieghbourhoods, while in reciept of medical benifits and childcare allowances, especially while driving around in Ford trucks, what about the pollution problems in our inner cities ?

I must first apologise for quoting vast portions of your elegantly written analysis of Bugsy's (Had's) ode.

I must keep this short so as not to lose track of the original purpose of this thread, whatever that was.
I did notice certain anomalies which your good self has taken the time to bring to the fore, but if I may add to your input; why would they catch a bus if they already had a truck made by the Ford Motor Company?
How did they get said truck onto the bus with them?

This poem is far deeper than it first appears.

Must read again to really 'feel' the poem instead of just reading it.

ahwell · 09-19-2006, 09:05 PM

Here am i living free
In a reasonable house
In a home county
Fields and hills
And wife to love
Two kids both sixteen and above
Three dogs with a farm to walk
seeing no one or to talk
miles and miles i walk the dogs

And thats enough of that because i have to go to work in a town some ten miles away housing scumbags of every race colour and creed and there are some real scumbags there. Now thats a downer.

Sid · 09-19-2006, 09:13 PM

Have a quiet night and keep 'well'.

I'll try and write one myself.

ahwell · 09-19-2006, 09:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sid

Have a quiet night and keep 'well'.

I'll try and write one myself.

I know its hard but try see the funny side of things. You know what i mean.

Sid · 09-19-2006, 09:20 PM

Yeah man!

ahwell · 09-19-2006, 09:23 PM

Now where were we ?

Sid · 09-19-2006, 09:34 PM

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Oh my, lots of 6's here. Is this a sign?

Bruv · 09-19-2006, 10:52 PM

That poem was devilish........

ahwell · 09-20-2006, 06:06 PM

**Will** · 09-20-2006, 08:02 PM

I'm a typical nazi nob,
I hate all those non-white strangers,
I blame them because I can't get a job,
I hate them because I'm scared of changes.

I want to rap the UK in a ball,
And stand it still in time and never progress,
If I had my way we'd build a wall,
And never allow a non-white to pass.

If you find a hole in my simple thinking,
I'll put on my blinkers and stop seeing sense,
I'll accept all lies without even blinking,
As long as they enforce my ignorance.

I have a somewhat blinkered view,
And any genuine concerns from you,
Get lost in bile that I spew,
Because I inflate the false and bury the true.

I'm a typical nazi nut,
I hate all those the do-gooders call,
Peaceful people from another culture; but.......!,
When the nazis win I'll be the first with my back against the wall.

-By Admin Will